Holy... wow. 5,000+ words. Now I know what took you so long.

Yeah.

*collapses*

Part of what took me so long is Optimus and Megatron in a room together is actually really hard for me, because I love them both. (Used to like OP a little more than I liked Screamer actually; now the queen bitch has won me over.) I find Optimus very, very difficult to write, and I'm so glad people think he works here.

That being said, holy cow, this was mind-blowing.

Wow. I'm honored.

Even as I watched TF:P, I never really thought about the chemistry between these two, but I think you've done a wonderful job at crafting it and making it immensely believable.

I think it's very easy to see them as bitter exes in canon, so this had to happen.

Again, I'm glad it works for you!

I must say I've become rather fond of the eloquent speeches your Megatron tends to give, and this story certainly didn't disappoint!

Thank you! I do try.

And Optimus' internal struggle is just... my goodness.

Yeah. *pats him*

Wait, I'm a Decepticon, I'm not supposed to be doing that...

I think I need time to pick up the pieces of my brain off the floor. GUH!

*helps pick up brain*

I was listening to this when I posted it (I don't usually listen to music when I write because it makes it hard for me to concentrate.)