Very cool :D Love the aft kicking and Nova's desire to go after Brightbolt.
Also, this was particularly cool:
"Traitor," he called, his voice quavering.
"Whatever," Nova snarled back, throwing a punch and then kicking him hard when he moved to defend against it. He crumpled, bent over, and struggled to stand.
And this: "Never mind," she corrected, watching the sky flare lavender. Nice moment of comedy in there :D
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Date: 2010-07-24 04:06 pm (UTC)Also, this was particularly cool:
"Traitor," he called, his voice quavering.
"Whatever," Nova snarled back, throwing a punch and then kicking him hard when he moved to defend against it. He crumpled, bent over, and struggled to stand.
And this: "Never mind," she corrected, watching the sky flare lavender. Nice moment of comedy in there :D
And the final piece of dialogue - love it.