This is different. Different, yet refreshing. I normally don't see first-person fanfic from you. There's a less formal writing tone in this fic than what I see in your third-person stories.
There's a large amount of individuality you've given to characters that indeed, in canon, don't have much personality at all and seem to work in the whole instead of in the individual. And despite it being told in D-2328's point of view, it really is more about D-674.
I honestly wasn't sure what to think of this when I first read it, which is why I sat on the review so long, but as I delved deeper, there's really a wonderful sense of character development that I've really come to enjoy, and the ending is really superb, and a bit of a mind twist with this line:
"D-1287 insists that D-2328 was in fact slain by D-674, who then attacked Bumblebee herself."
I'd love to know D-674's motive for this (other than being, well, a Deception. :P).
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Date: 2011-03-10 11:04 pm (UTC)There's a large amount of individuality you've given to characters that indeed, in canon, don't have much personality at all and seem to work in the whole instead of in the individual. And despite it being told in D-2328's point of view, it really is more about D-674.
I honestly wasn't sure what to think of this when I first read it, which is why I sat on the review so long, but as I delved deeper, there's really a wonderful sense of character development that I've really come to enjoy, and the ending is really superb, and a bit of a mind twist with this line:
"D-1287 insists that D-2328 was in fact slain by D-674, who then attacked Bumblebee herself."
I'd love to know D-674's motive for this (other than being, well, a Deception. :P).