Interesting ideas of ownership coming through here, and the smut is, again, hawt <3
Re. the surroundings - very nicely done. I had a solid feeling of place with this, and a nice feeling for the wider elite culture of conspicuous consumption as well.
Also this:
He waved at the devastation - the shattered wall, the shards on the floor, his own mangled frame. "But look what it's cost you." Perfect :D
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Date: 2012-01-19 05:06 pm (UTC)Re. the surroundings - very nicely done. I had a solid feeling of place with this, and a nice feeling for the wider elite culture of conspicuous consumption as well.
Also this:
He waved at the devastation - the shattered wall, the shards on the floor, his own mangled frame. "But look what it's cost you." Perfect :D