Thank you! I rushed through finishing this and wasn't at all sure how well it had come out. I'm glad to see it worked!
"And the moment when he ceases to think of Clench as a person and begins to think of him as a thing, that was very well done - creepy, subtle and impactful."
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Date: 2010-02-02 01:35 am (UTC)"And the moment when he ceases to think of Clench as a person and begins to think of him as a thing, that was very well done - creepy, subtle and impactful."
Huzzah, so it was noticeable!