Okay, somehow I missed this, and damn, am I sorry about that.
This is so perfect.
It is so completely Megatron to refuse to allow anyone or anything that close to him in a way he couldn't control, and I love how you worked that, used that short time when he was young enough to be inexperienced and turned it into something that is so perfectly him.
And yeah, that moment when Clench isn't Clench, is only the defeated thing under him... that is so right for Megs' particular psychology, and so subtle, that you leave my jaw dropped.
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Date: 2010-03-22 02:30 am (UTC)This is so perfect.
It is so completely Megatron to refuse to allow anyone or anything that close to him in a way he couldn't control, and I love how you worked that, used that short time when he was young enough to be inexperienced and turned it into something that is so perfectly him.
And yeah, that moment when Clench isn't Clench, is only the defeated thing under him... that is so right for Megs' particular psychology, and so subtle, that you leave my jaw dropped.